The throbbing....
This song has an amazing melody, and good bass, but I have one suggestion. You could take away the throb effect on the melody, but leave it on the bass, or at least lighten it on the melody, because it takes a lot to focus on it with such a strong throb. Great new songs coming out though!
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It's practically the exact same parts on instruments, but you have some bad instrument choice... wtf is up with 0:42??? The drums shouldn't be so strong or fast in a song like this either. 4/10 2/5
I completely missed this one by you...
I regret that. This is definitely one of your best songs. You should revamp this song... extended too! I'll probably start directing towards jazz and piano. Techno is definitely your thing though. Mellow techno, that is. Groovy? 10/10 5/5
LOVE the build up!
This really could go a lot of directions, but I think you chose the right path. It honestly sounds finished if you just added another instrument or two after a drop at the end. I can't think of a better word to describe it than... spacial? After the build up to the drum beat, which I realize is subtle, it seems just maybe four to six measures drawn out. 9/10 5/5
Hi?
I've heard your songs before, including this one, but now that I take a careful listen, it really is worth a mention. I has feeling and remains techno with a massive piano piece inside. I have no constructive criticism at all. This is perfect as it is. Keep writing like this! 10/10 5/5
Interesting...
You really are a bit out of the music mood. Last time I saw your user page, this was already here. I enjoyed the melody and the beats. It almost gives off some sort of exotic feel. The melody is quiet, but in this case that is perfect. I don't really have much constructive criticism at this point. 10/10 5/5
Wow
I see that the drums are great in this, but even for the trance song, some of the effects and a synth are REALLY quiet. I lose the synth once other effects start. It is a good song overall though, and it is only the sound balance out of place. I think a bunch of a**hole noobs are bombing you, because I brought it up almost a full point. 9/10 5/5
On the other side, where is my other great public, who'¨s supposed to at least get the score up to 2.45? I think they have fallen asleep.
I personally actually think this is a horrible song with potential directed in a the totally wrong direction. Could have used some more work on the build up.
Hehe, cheers
Wow.
This really does make me think of killer dolphins a bit! Some of the notes in the squeak that begins at 0:59 could be modified a bit, but it remains a great song overall. 5/5 9/10
thanks for the review, and well, I spent quite a while arranging and rearranging the squeak notes, but in the process I get too attached to how it sounds so it becomes hard for me to change anything. But yeah, I can hear the 0:59 bit going a bunch of potential different directions.
Great
I enjoy the beat and the melody. I can't think of any constructive criticism other than make the piano louder. Did I just hear an eighth note? 5/5 9/10
Wow
This officially proves you to be my favorite music artist. I first heard your hear you scream, but that is no match to many of your songs. Your voice alone stands out from 90 percent of newgrounds, topped off with the music. I could say you are my musical inspiration (joke not intended), but I simply cannot write or sing music. Only play it, so I remain unheard. Another song by you faved, 5/5 10/10. Keep with this!
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