Hmm.
It is a great song, but I brought it down 2 stars just because of the effect that began at 0:52, which was a bit ugly with the remainder of the song. I almost did 7 stars because of the what I believe is some sort of bass towards the end of the song had an off-beat note that sounded out of place, but its too cool to vote any lower. 4/5 8/10
Haha thank you. I use too much dissonance in my songs intentionally. I think it sounds good but it's not what the Newgrounds community expects.
Thanks for the review! It does help a lot.
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Believe it or not, I found the melody to be a bit generic, and possible repetitive, but that hardly effects the awesomeness of this song, because all the synth combined sounded epic, only to be amplified somewhere before 2:00. The melody takes away a star, but remains more than most people's expectations. 5/5 9/10
Thank you! I agree about the melody. This was a song I wrote when I had a lot of writer's block ha.
Good beat, repetitive.
I like the sound of the melody mixed in with the beat, but you could have had a stronger beat and lengthened the melody. Otherwise, great song!
The melody was supposed to maintain its similar sturcutre throughout the song, but I guess I didn't do it well enough. I fully agree about the weak beat, so I'll try to work up on the drums in my future songs.
Thanks for dropping me a review.
Maybe a bit out of place
The drums seem overbearing to the melody, but the song was great overall and didn't feel too repetitious. I'm just being picky though.
thnk you :D
Great, but missing something
I really liked it, but it seemed to need a bit more push on the beat, like turning up the bass or something. Otherwise, I really liked the beat and the song. You should really remake this an octave up for melody! It would be even cooler!
Make the what an octave higher, the bass?
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